Thursday, December 04, 2008

Of Hope and Misgivings II

I thought of you and where you’d gone
and let the world spin madly on.
Blinking through shades of time and memory;
so carefully I lost,
to the man I chose to be.
Now these ticking hands of a mechanical heart
move too fast to allow a new start.
There are no new days so long as there’s memory;
what’s left to say
is better unheard.
Unheard by the world and unspoken by the tongue
burnt inside a mind cursed to be on the run.
I cared about them rules but just not enough;
now its time already,
to save a last dying laugh.
A last dying laugh for all them teary eyed lies,
trading broken peace for too high a price.
I tell you it ain’t worth dying to an old cheap trick;
so long as you’re standing
on your two feet.

ps : snatches of words and ideas and have been unscrupulously whacked from certain writings by The Comedian & Peter Pan.....aaaaaaaargh! the poets have been hunted.

pps: also words have been borrowed from Meenakshi who hasn't been caught laughing for a really long time.

6 Comments:

Blogger The Comedian said...

Its from a song by a band called The Weepies :) check it out... very trippy

7:24 PM  
Blogger Meenakshi said...

doesnt my line get acknowledgment?

6:12 AM  
Blogger rorschach said...

@meenakshi: it ought to, but it made me think of its appropreity, hence ignored. i also changed it a bit. apologies and amends shall be made.

@comedian: yo will do. you haven't mentioned the song title bugger.

9:36 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yay. acknowledgment. (my life sucks, hence my blog reflects my sucky life :) )

1:47 AM  
Blogger The Comedian said...

i guess it aint as sucky as going through all the comments on blogs of people...

12:28 AM  
Blogger rorschach said...

@comedian : why are you going through comments on the blogs of people. you're in MALAYSISA with horny foriegn exchange students. switch off your damn comp and GET LAID BITCH! heh.

5:31 AM  

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